WHY COULDN’T THE GRADUATE STUDENTS FIND JOB?
Why have we tried to enter the university so much since our childhood? Why do people give importance the universities so much? In generally, I know that everybody answers these questions as for future and finding job easily. But a lot of students couldn’t find job in our country after they graduate. All right! Why couldn’t they find job?
Firstly, universities take a lot of students for some departments. Students are also choosing these particular departments. Therefore; lots of students graduate from these departments. For example; in our country students prefer mostly like sociology, philosophy, water products etc. departments because these departments take students with low score. Students who have low score prefer to study in these departments. If they graduate, there are so many students who graduate from these departments. So students couldn’t find job easily after graduate.
Secondly, every people who graduate from university don’t make their own job so that they encounter some problems while they search job which is related to their own departments which they graduate. For example; a teacher can work in another job if s/he isn’t appointed. Another example; in our country a veterinarian can work as food engineer instead of people who graduate from food engineer department. Or people who graduate from sociology or psychology are appointed at schools as guidance teacher. Of course; a lot of people have a complaint against these situations. Because they couldn’t find job after they graduate from university because of these problems.
And lastly; people who reach the retirement age aren’t being retired. Because; mostly people who reach the retirement age have a family. And they are responsible for their family. They have to look for them and they have to interested in their necessities. In order to these, they need to money. For money, they have to work. So people who reach the retirement age don’t want to retire because they couldn’t earn enough money if they retired. Because of this situation, people who graduate from university couldn’t find job so that they take place of retired person.
Briefly; lots of people are unemployed nowadays in our country although they graduate from university. And also there are a lot of causes about this problem. I think; our government should find a solution no more for this problem.
19 Aralık 2010 Pazar
10 Aralık 2010 Cuma
I WANT A HUSBAND
When I think about married couples, I don’t know whether I want to get married or not. If I’ll get married, how should I have a husband? I want a husband but which standards are important for me?
I would like to have a job. I don’t want to stay at home whole day. I believe that I can become economically independent. I can earn money which has my own. I don’t want to ask for money from my husband to my individual necessities. So I should have a job. And I want a husband who doesn’t oppose to my economically independence. He should let me to work. I should say about everything whatever I want and my husband shouldn’t interfere in my opinions. Of course he can say his own ideas but he should respect my ideas too. So I want a husband who respects me and my thoughts. And also my husband and I should have good relationship. For example; my husband should listen to me carefully when I talk about something and then he should make comment positive or negative about my ideas. Essentially this situation should be mutual. I shouldn’t argue with my husband about our opinion every time. I should enjoy becoming with my husband together. So I want a husband who makes me happy when I stay with him together. And I want a husband who is interested in my opinions.
I want a husband who can look after our child or children. Whenever I want to go somewhere with my friends or lonely, my husband should look after them. He shouldn’t look after them only when I haven’t been at home. He should be interested in them all the time. I want a husband who doesn’t forget our special days. He should remember my birthday, our marriage anniversary etc. and he should celebrate these special days each year. I want a husband who becomes romantic. Sometimes he should make romantic things for me. I don’t want a husband who drops off on the sofa when he watches TV. I want a husband who takes me out somewhere together at night or at the weekends.
What a pity! I think, it is impossible to find a husband who has these peculiarities. If you have a husband who has these characteristics, you are very lucky woman.
When I think about married couples, I don’t know whether I want to get married or not. If I’ll get married, how should I have a husband? I want a husband but which standards are important for me?
I would like to have a job. I don’t want to stay at home whole day. I believe that I can become economically independent. I can earn money which has my own. I don’t want to ask for money from my husband to my individual necessities. So I should have a job. And I want a husband who doesn’t oppose to my economically independence. He should let me to work. I should say about everything whatever I want and my husband shouldn’t interfere in my opinions. Of course he can say his own ideas but he should respect my ideas too. So I want a husband who respects me and my thoughts. And also my husband and I should have good relationship. For example; my husband should listen to me carefully when I talk about something and then he should make comment positive or negative about my ideas. Essentially this situation should be mutual. I shouldn’t argue with my husband about our opinion every time. I should enjoy becoming with my husband together. So I want a husband who makes me happy when I stay with him together. And I want a husband who is interested in my opinions.
I want a husband who can look after our child or children. Whenever I want to go somewhere with my friends or lonely, my husband should look after them. He shouldn’t look after them only when I haven’t been at home. He should be interested in them all the time. I want a husband who doesn’t forget our special days. He should remember my birthday, our marriage anniversary etc. and he should celebrate these special days each year. I want a husband who becomes romantic. Sometimes he should make romantic things for me. I don’t want a husband who drops off on the sofa when he watches TV. I want a husband who takes me out somewhere together at night or at the weekends.
What a pity! I think, it is impossible to find a husband who has these peculiarities. If you have a husband who has these characteristics, you are very lucky woman.
1 Kasım 2010 Pazartesi
opinion essay
TRUSTINESS OF NON-CONVENTIONAL MEDICINES
Nowadays; consumption of non-conventional medicines are very common. People especially who has serious illnesses like cancer try these traditional methods to recover and decrease their pain if their doctors tell them hopeless about their disease. So people tend to non-conventional treatments. Of course; trustiness of these treatments don’t prove with tests but lots of people heal thanks to non-conventional treatments. So I think; we can use non-conventional medicines if we use these medicines with biological medicines which the doctors advise us.
A lot of people who become an expert at non-conventional treatments; talk about these treatments on TV, magazines etc. they say that non-conventional medicines are beneficial for people’s health, these medicines don’t have lots of side effects like drugs, non-conventional medicines are healthier than drugs. They claim that they can treat people who has serious illnesses. They also prove their claims with examples. All right! Can we use these traditional medicines (non-conventional medicines) although we don’t know everything whether these medicines heal people’s disease exactly or not? Or do you decline these natural methods although a lot of examples are shown for you. Actually; I think, we don’t depend on only non- conventional treatments or we don’t depend on only doctor’s treatments. Whatever doctor’s treatments prove with tests, non-conventional treatments are used a lot of people and they heal owing to these treatments. So we can use these natural treatments with doctor’s treatments.
To sum up; the power of non-conventional treatments to become healthy and to get better are effective although their reliability don’t prove exactly. These treatments have been used since many century by people.
Nowadays; consumption of non-conventional medicines are very common. People especially who has serious illnesses like cancer try these traditional methods to recover and decrease their pain if their doctors tell them hopeless about their disease. So people tend to non-conventional treatments. Of course; trustiness of these treatments don’t prove with tests but lots of people heal thanks to non-conventional treatments. So I think; we can use non-conventional medicines if we use these medicines with biological medicines which the doctors advise us.
A lot of people who become an expert at non-conventional treatments; talk about these treatments on TV, magazines etc. they say that non-conventional medicines are beneficial for people’s health, these medicines don’t have lots of side effects like drugs, non-conventional medicines are healthier than drugs. They claim that they can treat people who has serious illnesses. They also prove their claims with examples. All right! Can we use these traditional medicines (non-conventional medicines) although we don’t know everything whether these medicines heal people’s disease exactly or not? Or do you decline these natural methods although a lot of examples are shown for you. Actually; I think, we don’t depend on only non- conventional treatments or we don’t depend on only doctor’s treatments. Whatever doctor’s treatments prove with tests, non-conventional treatments are used a lot of people and they heal owing to these treatments. So we can use these natural treatments with doctor’s treatments.
To sum up; the power of non-conventional treatments to become healthy and to get better are effective although their reliability don’t prove exactly. These treatments have been used since many century by people.
22 Ekim 2010 Cuma
TWO DİFFERENT OBSTACLES
Everybody experiences lots of obstacles in their own life. Sometimes these obstacles could be came about regarding the family or connected with money like in Angela’s Ashes. Or sometimes they could be came about physically just like in the Miracle Worker. We shouldn’t give up anything because of our obstacles. We should go after our dreams as Frank and Helen. They didn’t give up anything although they had some problems. Frank and his family had financial problems in Angela’s ashes. His brothers died because of these problems. His father abandoned them. He started to work and earn money because he had a dream and he wanted to go America. At the end of the film; he reached his dream. He went to America but in the Miracle worker; Helen had a different obstacle from Frank. She was blind and deaf. She told anybody her problems and she was a wild child. She hadn’t got financial problems like Frank in Angela’s ashes but I think her problem was more important than Frank. Frank could read and write but she couldn’t. Her family called a teacher and teacher taught her finger alphabet. She learned some words and at the end of the story; her family, her teacher and she was very happy. She wasn’t a wild child anymore because she didn’t give up. So the Miracle worker was more impressive film than Angela’s Ashes. Both of them was dramatic but the miracle worker was more effective than Angela’s Ashes. In conclusion; in both of film main characters had some obstacles but their obstacles was different from each other. In spite of these different obstacles, they didn’t give up and they exceeded their obstacles.
Everybody experiences lots of obstacles in their own life. Sometimes these obstacles could be came about regarding the family or connected with money like in Angela’s Ashes. Or sometimes they could be came about physically just like in the Miracle Worker. We shouldn’t give up anything because of our obstacles. We should go after our dreams as Frank and Helen. They didn’t give up anything although they had some problems. Frank and his family had financial problems in Angela’s ashes. His brothers died because of these problems. His father abandoned them. He started to work and earn money because he had a dream and he wanted to go America. At the end of the film; he reached his dream. He went to America but in the Miracle worker; Helen had a different obstacle from Frank. She was blind and deaf. She told anybody her problems and she was a wild child. She hadn’t got financial problems like Frank in Angela’s ashes but I think her problem was more important than Frank. Frank could read and write but she couldn’t. Her family called a teacher and teacher taught her finger alphabet. She learned some words and at the end of the story; her family, her teacher and she was very happy. She wasn’t a wild child anymore because she didn’t give up. So the Miracle worker was more impressive film than Angela’s Ashes. Both of them was dramatic but the miracle worker was more effective than Angela’s Ashes. In conclusion; in both of film main characters had some obstacles but their obstacles was different from each other. In spite of these different obstacles, they didn’t give up and they exceeded their obstacles.
26 Mayıs 2010 Çarşamba
Cause and Effect essay-five paragraph
THE CAUSES OF STUDENT’S FAILURE AND STRESS
What do the students become stressful and failure? Or why do the students become more stressful and failure in their school life? Actually, answers of these questions aren’t very hard. Everybody who became student can answer these questions. Because; everybody who became student experiences stressful times about their grade and failure in school life. The causes of stress or failure to the students are connected with family, friends and school. These can affect students psychologically and can make students more stressful and failure.
Firstly, family is very important for students in their school life. Family behaviours, family pressure or family support are very important for students and these affect students negatively or positively in their school life and success. For example; if a student’s family pressurize them into taking high grade, the student can feel under pressure, he/she can fail her/his exam and she/he can become stressful. These cause some problems between family and student and these can affect student negatively. If families want to become a good family, take high grade from their children and become successful from their children, they should support their children.
Secondly, student’s friends and companion are very important for students in their school life and for their success. Bad friendship or social category can affect students badly. If a student has bad friends or her/his friends are richer than him/her, the student can be affected them badly. This type situations cause failure of students in their school life. For instance; if a student has bad or friends, the student can also want to make whatever they make. This affects this student’s success, school life etc. This can causes family problems and stress. So families should pay attention to their children’s friends. They should be interested in not only their school life and their grade but also their relationship with their friends if they give importance their life and success.
And thirdly, student’s success and their ’s school grades are very important for students in their school life. Low grades or failure affects students badly. They cause some psychological problems. They cause stress to the students. They affect student’s school life. If students take low grades or fail their exam and their families pressurize the into their grades and failure, they can be affected badly and these cause becoming more stressful. Therefore they may not want to study and they may fail their exam again and again. So families should support their children whether they are successful or not.
To sum up, there are a lot of causes of stress or failure to the students and these causes affect students positively or negatively(but in generally negatively). Therefore families make a lot of things for their children.
What do the students become stressful and failure? Or why do the students become more stressful and failure in their school life? Actually, answers of these questions aren’t very hard. Everybody who became student can answer these questions. Because; everybody who became student experiences stressful times about their grade and failure in school life. The causes of stress or failure to the students are connected with family, friends and school. These can affect students psychologically and can make students more stressful and failure.
Firstly, family is very important for students in their school life. Family behaviours, family pressure or family support are very important for students and these affect students negatively or positively in their school life and success. For example; if a student’s family pressurize them into taking high grade, the student can feel under pressure, he/she can fail her/his exam and she/he can become stressful. These cause some problems between family and student and these can affect student negatively. If families want to become a good family, take high grade from their children and become successful from their children, they should support their children.
Secondly, student’s friends and companion are very important for students in their school life and for their success. Bad friendship or social category can affect students badly. If a student has bad friends or her/his friends are richer than him/her, the student can be affected them badly. This type situations cause failure of students in their school life. For instance; if a student has bad or friends, the student can also want to make whatever they make. This affects this student’s success, school life etc. This can causes family problems and stress. So families should pay attention to their children’s friends. They should be interested in not only their school life and their grade but also their relationship with their friends if they give importance their life and success.
And thirdly, student’s success and their ’s school grades are very important for students in their school life. Low grades or failure affects students badly. They cause some psychological problems. They cause stress to the students. They affect student’s school life. If students take low grades or fail their exam and their families pressurize the into their grades and failure, they can be affected badly and these cause becoming more stressful. Therefore they may not want to study and they may fail their exam again and again. So families should support their children whether they are successful or not.
To sum up, there are a lot of causes of stress or failure to the students and these causes affect students positively or negatively(but in generally negatively). Therefore families make a lot of things for their children.
18 Mayıs 2010 Salı
revised descriptive essay
MY COMFORTABLE PLACE
Every time when I feel tired or upset and argue with my mother, I generally go to the park where I can relax myself and feel better. It is near my house, so I can go there every time when I want. I love this park and I become comfortable there.
This park has been there since I was a child. I used to go there with my friends when I was a child. There was formerly a small park. But of course, this park has gradually became very big . Now this park is one of the biggest parks in my city. This park’s name is Lalezar. It means tulip garden in Turkish. Lalezar has multicoloured and various kinds of tulips. The tulip’s seeds are ordered from Netherlands to this park. Tulips are cultivated specially and gardeners are interested in them every day. Lalezar has lots of things for both children and adults. There are lots of fountains and especially at night these fountains look wonderful and fascinating with tulips. Sometimes I go there at night in order to watch these fascinating fountains with multicoloured tulips. It has three entrance doors but somebody says that it has also a tunnel. According to a legend, at independence war our soldiers could go to city centre thanks to this tunnel but this tunnel couldn’t be found despite lots of researches. So this legend wasn’t knew real or not. Lalezar has also children’s park and tea garden. Families can drink something at the tea garden while their children play in children’s park. In addition, some activities are sometimes held there. It is a park which has lots of visitors. Especially they come there in order to see multicoloured tulips. Sometimes it is very crowded and I feel as if I go to a concert. It has lots of green area, besides tulip gardens and a lot of animals live there. You can see these animals when you go there. You can also do sports there. It has racetrack. For example, I sometimes go there at the weekends for running.
To sum up; I can relax myself and feel better when I go there. A lot of people are also like me. They go there for fun and comfort. I wish this imaginative place became real and I lived this my imaginative place there forever.
Every time when I feel tired or upset and argue with my mother, I generally go to the park where I can relax myself and feel better. It is near my house, so I can go there every time when I want. I love this park and I become comfortable there.
This park has been there since I was a child. I used to go there with my friends when I was a child. There was formerly a small park. But of course, this park has gradually became very big . Now this park is one of the biggest parks in my city. This park’s name is Lalezar. It means tulip garden in Turkish. Lalezar has multicoloured and various kinds of tulips. The tulip’s seeds are ordered from Netherlands to this park. Tulips are cultivated specially and gardeners are interested in them every day. Lalezar has lots of things for both children and adults. There are lots of fountains and especially at night these fountains look wonderful and fascinating with tulips. Sometimes I go there at night in order to watch these fascinating fountains with multicoloured tulips. It has three entrance doors but somebody says that it has also a tunnel. According to a legend, at independence war our soldiers could go to city centre thanks to this tunnel but this tunnel couldn’t be found despite lots of researches. So this legend wasn’t knew real or not. Lalezar has also children’s park and tea garden. Families can drink something at the tea garden while their children play in children’s park. In addition, some activities are sometimes held there. It is a park which has lots of visitors. Especially they come there in order to see multicoloured tulips. Sometimes it is very crowded and I feel as if I go to a concert. It has lots of green area, besides tulip gardens and a lot of animals live there. You can see these animals when you go there. You can also do sports there. It has racetrack. For example, I sometimes go there at the weekends for running.
To sum up; I can relax myself and feel better when I go there. A lot of people are also like me. They go there for fun and comfort. I wish this imaginative place became real and I lived this my imaginative place there forever.
process analysis essay
GRADUATION PARTIES
Graduation parties are very important for students because they get rid of all stress which they experience all the year. This day is a special day for students. In generally, it makes at the end of year and students who will graduate that year participate in this party. And both students are prepared for this party and the venue where the graduation will be celebrated is prepared for this party.
Firstly, the venue where the graduation will be celebrated is arranged months ago and it is specifically prepared for the party. In the place dinner is prepared with beverages and musics. It is decorated with balloons and ornaments and it waits guests preparingly.
Secondly, students specifically prepare themselves. They buy special clothes for graduation party. They (especially girls) arrange a hair dresser. Party day is very important day for them because the day organise for them. So they value their appearance. Girls make up and are made their hair. Boys also go to the barber. And everybody goes to the venue where the graduation will be celebrated.
And lastly, everybody gathers in the venue and they have a friendly chat. They sit the tables and eat diner. After diner, music starts and everybody starts dance. In the meantime waiters distribute beverages and snacks. Everybody has a good time. They dance until midnight.
Graduation parties are marvellous for having a good time for students. They get rid of all stress which they experience all the year thanks to the graduation parties. They live an unforgettable day. So they always remember that day.
Graduation parties are very important for students because they get rid of all stress which they experience all the year. This day is a special day for students. In generally, it makes at the end of year and students who will graduate that year participate in this party. And both students are prepared for this party and the venue where the graduation will be celebrated is prepared for this party.
Firstly, the venue where the graduation will be celebrated is arranged months ago and it is specifically prepared for the party. In the place dinner is prepared with beverages and musics. It is decorated with balloons and ornaments and it waits guests preparingly.
Secondly, students specifically prepare themselves. They buy special clothes for graduation party. They (especially girls) arrange a hair dresser. Party day is very important day for them because the day organise for them. So they value their appearance. Girls make up and are made their hair. Boys also go to the barber. And everybody goes to the venue where the graduation will be celebrated.
And lastly, everybody gathers in the venue and they have a friendly chat. They sit the tables and eat diner. After diner, music starts and everybody starts dance. In the meantime waiters distribute beverages and snacks. Everybody has a good time. They dance until midnight.
Graduation parties are marvellous for having a good time for students. They get rid of all stress which they experience all the year thanks to the graduation parties. They live an unforgettable day. So they always remember that day.
6 Mayıs 2010 Perşembe
argumentative essay
SMOKING HABIT AND SMOKING PROHIBITION
Last year, smoking habit was hot topic in Turkey. To prevent smoking habit and to cut down smoking habit, Government prohibited smoking in somewhere and government has fined people for smoking cigarette in there since last year. However, smoking prohibition didn’t work exactly for cutting down smoking habit.
Firstly, government prohibited selling cigarette children who was under 18 years old. Actually, it was very beneficial for preventing smoking habit in children but it didn’t work. Because some small shops sold cigarette children who was under 18 years old. And government didn’t prevent this so children still continue smoking.
Secondly, government prohibited smoking cigarette in hospitals and schools. Everybody also supported this. Because people who didn’t smoke , didn’t like people who smoked and it irritated them. So they supported this prohibition but this prohibition but this prohibition also didn’t work exactly. For example; in my high school my friends and my teachers who smoked, started to smoke outside in break time after this prohibition. In short this prohibition also didn’t work for cutting dow smoking.
Lastly, government prohibited smoking in close areas (especially in cafes and bars) and government fined people for smoking in these areas. But it also didn’t work because people who smoke cigarette, started to smoke outside of the cafes and the bars . and this situation bothered people. Some people may say that it is work , people don’t smoke in close areas now. But it isn’t work because people continue smoking.
In conclusion, although government prohibit smoking, people continue smoking. Even they don’t smoke in close areas, they can smoke outside and they continue to poison themselves.
Last year, smoking habit was hot topic in Turkey. To prevent smoking habit and to cut down smoking habit, Government prohibited smoking in somewhere and government has fined people for smoking cigarette in there since last year. However, smoking prohibition didn’t work exactly for cutting down smoking habit.
Firstly, government prohibited selling cigarette children who was under 18 years old. Actually, it was very beneficial for preventing smoking habit in children but it didn’t work. Because some small shops sold cigarette children who was under 18 years old. And government didn’t prevent this so children still continue smoking.
Secondly, government prohibited smoking cigarette in hospitals and schools. Everybody also supported this. Because people who didn’t smoke , didn’t like people who smoked and it irritated them. So they supported this prohibition but this prohibition but this prohibition also didn’t work exactly. For example; in my high school my friends and my teachers who smoked, started to smoke outside in break time after this prohibition. In short this prohibition also didn’t work for cutting dow smoking.
Lastly, government prohibited smoking in close areas (especially in cafes and bars) and government fined people for smoking in these areas. But it also didn’t work because people who smoke cigarette, started to smoke outside of the cafes and the bars . and this situation bothered people. Some people may say that it is work , people don’t smoke in close areas now. But it isn’t work because people continue smoking.
In conclusion, although government prohibit smoking, people continue smoking. Even they don’t smoke in close areas, they can smoke outside and they continue to poison themselves.
cause and effect essay
BECOME UNHAPPY
Why do people become unhappy? A lot of things can cause this. For example; friendship problems, family problems, loneliness etc. can cause becoming unhappy. And these reasons break through some emotional or psychological problems.
Actually, some reasons which cause becoming unhappy, are relevant each other. Because in generally these reasons break through same problems. For example; some people are very sad when they fail their exams or some people are under stres when they will enter exams and to be under stress can cause becoming unsuccessful and eventually these people who are under stress can be sad and unhappy. Or some people who have family or friendship problems can be unhappy. These reasons and problems are very harmful for people. Because these can affect people emotionally or psychologically.
To sum up, there are a lot of reasons for becoming unhappy and these reasons can cause some problems. These problems can also affect people badly.
Why do people become unhappy? A lot of things can cause this. For example; friendship problems, family problems, loneliness etc. can cause becoming unhappy. And these reasons break through some emotional or psychological problems.
Actually, some reasons which cause becoming unhappy, are relevant each other. Because in generally these reasons break through same problems. For example; some people are very sad when they fail their exams or some people are under stres when they will enter exams and to be under stress can cause becoming unsuccessful and eventually these people who are under stress can be sad and unhappy. Or some people who have family or friendship problems can be unhappy. These reasons and problems are very harmful for people. Because these can affect people emotionally or psychologically.
To sum up, there are a lot of reasons for becoming unhappy and these reasons can cause some problems. These problems can also affect people badly.
6 Nisan 2010 Salı
the example of descriptive essay
My Favorite Place
by Joleen Chin
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Every time when I felt upset or sick, I liked to go to a special place where I could relax myself and feel better. It is the club; I have joined the club for 3 years. My sisters recommended this place to me; they told me that I could find many fun there. It's near my house and our hospital, so I walked there in 10 minutes. I usually stayed there for 2 or 3 hours and went home. I loved the club; I felt comfortable there!
The club only allowed women to be members; I didn't worry about my privacy. The club was the biggest women's club in my country. It's located in a basement where there was a lot of space to do the different activities. You could see a beautiful warm water pool in the middle area at first. You could find many big rooms behind the pool; there were a massage pool, a spa shower, a hot room, a cold room, an exercise room, an MTV center, a massage center, and two restaurants.
When I finished my work everyday, I felt so tired. Everyone knew working in the hospital had many stresses. I needed to find a way to help myself; it's the best choice for me. I often took a shower first and swam for 20 minutes to relax my strained muscles. When I finished the exercise, I stayed at the spa massage pool. The strong water waves could massage my whole body. I usually took the oil massage once a month; it's very fun when someone has good skills. Finally, I liked to watch a video and take a nap.
Although it costs a lot of money to be a club member, I loved this club and enjoyed speding time there. I liked to stay there for a whole day. I hope I can join the club again after I come back to my country.
by Joleen Chin
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Every time when I felt upset or sick, I liked to go to a special place where I could relax myself and feel better. It is the club; I have joined the club for 3 years. My sisters recommended this place to me; they told me that I could find many fun there. It's near my house and our hospital, so I walked there in 10 minutes. I usually stayed there for 2 or 3 hours and went home. I loved the club; I felt comfortable there!
The club only allowed women to be members; I didn't worry about my privacy. The club was the biggest women's club in my country. It's located in a basement where there was a lot of space to do the different activities. You could see a beautiful warm water pool in the middle area at first. You could find many big rooms behind the pool; there were a massage pool, a spa shower, a hot room, a cold room, an exercise room, an MTV center, a massage center, and two restaurants.
When I finished my work everyday, I felt so tired. Everyone knew working in the hospital had many stresses. I needed to find a way to help myself; it's the best choice for me. I often took a shower first and swam for 20 minutes to relax my strained muscles. When I finished the exercise, I stayed at the spa massage pool. The strong water waves could massage my whole body. I usually took the oil massage once a month; it's very fun when someone has good skills. Finally, I liked to watch a video and take a nap.
Although it costs a lot of money to be a club member, I loved this club and enjoyed speding time there. I liked to stay there for a whole day. I hope I can join the club again after I come back to my country.
10 Mart 2010 Çarşamba
Compare and Contrast essay
MY HOMETOWNS
There are two places that take part in my life. One of them is Kütahya and the other is Eskişehir. They have a lot of differences when you compare them. Because they are fairly differnt places. Although they have a lot of differences, both of them are beautiful city and I love both of them.
Kütahya isn’t big city and it’s population isn’t very crowded. It isn’t developed city. It is developing city. There isn’t shopping centre in Kütahya but there are a lot of supermarkets and clothing stores. You can see these clothing stores when you g oto Sevgi Yolu. Although it is small city, it is amusing and beautiful city. Moreover, Kütahya is my hometown. It is the most important thing for me.
In contrast; Eskişehir is bigger city than Kütahya although it isn’t as big as İstanbul or Ankara. It’s population is very crowded and million of people live there. It is a developed city and it stil developed itself. There are three shoppig centre, a lot of supermarkets clothig stores. There is Hamam Yolu like Sevgi Yolu in Kütahya. You can find some cafes or stores in there. And there tram. You can go with tram if you want to go somewhere. I can g oto Eskişehir whenever I want to. Because My grandmother live there and there isn’t far away from Kütahya. Briefly Eskişehir is my second hometown.
In conclusion; Eskişehir and Kütahya are different from each other but I love both city. Both of them are my hometown.
4 Mart 2010 Perşembe
opinion essay
Marriage To Someone From Another Country
Somebody says that marriage to someone from another country isn't good. Somebody also says that marriage to someone from another country may be good. Actually,both of them have advantages and disadvantages. So I think,we should think these advantages and disadvantages before deciding to marry to someone from another country.
Firstly,marriages to someone from another country have some advantages.For example;you can learn new culture and you can teach your culture or you can improve second language when you marry someone from another country. Secondly; marriages to someone from another country have also some disadvantages. For example;accustomed to new culture may be very hard. You have some trouble while you get accustomed to new culture so you have some problems because of culture differencies.May be your believes are different so you have some problems. I think; you think all of these advantages and disadvantages before you marry someone from another country. You should marry if you can afford. Afterwards; you shouldn't regret. In my opinion;all of these disadvantages are very difficult things in order to afford to marriage someone from another country so I'm not agree that marriage someone from another country is good. But there are some people who marry someone from another country and some of them are happy in their marriage.
In conclusion; marriages someone from another country change person to person. Nowadays; there are people who marry someone from another country and become happy.There are also people who marry someone from another country but become unhappy.
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Somebody says that marriage to someone from another country isn't good. Somebody also says that marriage to someone from another country may be good. Actually,both of them have advantages and disadvantages. So I think,we should think these advantages and disadvantages before deciding to marry to someone from another country.
Firstly,marriages to someone from another country have some advantages.For example;you can learn new culture and you can teach your culture or you can improve second language when you marry someone from another country. Secondly; marriages to someone from another country have also some disadvantages. For example;accustomed to new culture may be very hard. You have some trouble while you get accustomed to new culture so you have some problems because of culture differencies.May be your believes are different so you have some problems. I think; you think all of these advantages and disadvantages before you marry someone from another country. You should marry if you can afford. Afterwards; you shouldn't regret. In my opinion;all of these disadvantages are very difficult things in order to afford to marriage someone from another country so I'm not agree that marriage someone from another country is good. But there are some people who marry someone from another country and some of them are happy in their marriage.
In conclusion; marriages someone from another country change person to person. Nowadays; there are people who marry someone from another country and become happy.There are also people who marry someone from another country but become unhappy.
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23 Şubat 2010 Salı
my describtive essay(writing homework)
MY COMFORTABLE PLACE
Everytime when I feel tired or upset and when I argue with my mother, I generally go to the park where I can relax myself and feel better.It is near my house, so I go there everytime when I want. I love this park and I become comfortable there.
This park has been there since I was child.I go there with my friends when I was a child. Of course, This park becomes very big gradually. Now this park is one of the big parks in my country.It has lots of things for both children and adults. There are lots of fountains and especially at night these fountains look wonderful.Sometimes I go there at nigt in order that I watch them.There are also childre's park and tea garden.Besides sometimes it is made some activities at there. It is a park which has lots of visitors.Sometimes there is very crowded and I feel myself as if I go to a concert.It has lots of green area, so a lot of animal live there.You can see these animals when you go there. You can also do sports there. For example;I sometimes go there at weekends for running so I feel myself healty.
In conclusion; I can relax myself and feel better at there. A lot of people are also like me. They go there for amusement and comfort. I wish I lived there.
Everytime when I feel tired or upset and when I argue with my mother, I generally go to the park where I can relax myself and feel better.It is near my house, so I go there everytime when I want. I love this park and I become comfortable there.
This park has been there since I was child.I go there with my friends when I was a child. Of course, This park becomes very big gradually. Now this park is one of the big parks in my country.It has lots of things for both children and adults. There are lots of fountains and especially at night these fountains look wonderful.Sometimes I go there at nigt in order that I watch them.There are also childre's park and tea garden.Besides sometimes it is made some activities at there. It is a park which has lots of visitors.Sometimes there is very crowded and I feel myself as if I go to a concert.It has lots of green area, so a lot of animal live there.You can see these animals when you go there. You can also do sports there. For example;I sometimes go there at weekends for running so I feel myself healty.
In conclusion; I can relax myself and feel better at there. A lot of people are also like me. They go there for amusement and comfort. I wish I lived there.
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