26 Mayıs 2010 Çarşamba

Cause and Effect essay-five paragraph

THE CAUSES OF STUDENT’S FAILURE AND STRESS
What do the students become stressful and failure? Or why do the students become more stressful and failure in their school life? Actually, answers of these questions aren’t very hard. Everybody who became student can answer these questions. Because; everybody who became student experiences stressful times about their grade and failure in school life. The causes of stress or failure to the students are connected with family, friends and school. These can affect students psychologically and can make students more stressful and failure.
Firstly, family is very important for students in their school life. Family behaviours, family pressure or family support are very important for students and these affect students negatively or positively in their school life and success. For example; if a student’s family pressurize them into taking high grade, the student can feel under pressure, he/she can fail her/his exam and she/he can become stressful. These cause some problems between family and student and these can affect student negatively. If families want to become a good family, take high grade from their children and become successful from their children, they should support their children.
Secondly, student’s friends and companion are very important for students in their school life and for their success. Bad friendship or social category can affect students badly. If a student has bad friends or her/his friends are richer than him/her, the student can be affected them badly. This type situations cause failure of students in their school life. For instance; if a student has bad or friends, the student can also want to make whatever they make. This affects this student’s success, school life etc. This can causes family problems and stress. So families should pay attention to their children’s friends. They should be interested in not only their school life and their grade but also their relationship with their friends if they give importance their life and success.
And thirdly, student’s success and their ’s school grades are very important for students in their school life. Low grades or failure affects students badly. They cause some psychological problems. They cause stress to the students. They affect student’s school life. If students take low grades or fail their exam and their families pressurize the into their grades and failure, they can be affected badly and these cause becoming more stressful. Therefore they may not want to study and they may fail their exam again and again. So families should support their children whether they are successful or not.
To sum up, there are a lot of causes of stress or failure to the students and these causes affect students positively or negatively(but in generally negatively). Therefore families make a lot of things for their children.

18 Mayıs 2010 Salı

revised descriptive essay

MY COMFORTABLE PLACE
Every time when I feel tired or upset and argue with my mother, I generally go to the park where I can relax myself and feel better. It is near my house, so I can go there every time when I want. I love this park and I become comfortable there.
This park has been there since I was a child. I used to go there with my friends when I was a child. There was formerly a small park. But of course, this park has gradually became very big . Now this park is one of the biggest parks in my city. This park’s name is Lalezar. It means tulip garden in Turkish. Lalezar has multicoloured and various kinds of tulips. The tulip’s seeds are ordered from Netherlands to this park. Tulips are cultivated specially and gardeners are interested in them every day. Lalezar has lots of things for both children and adults. There are lots of fountains and especially at night these fountains look wonderful and fascinating with tulips. Sometimes I go there at night in order to watch these fascinating fountains with multicoloured tulips. It has three entrance doors but somebody says that it has also a tunnel. According to a legend, at independence war our soldiers could go to city centre thanks to this tunnel but this tunnel couldn’t be found despite lots of researches. So this legend wasn’t knew real or not. Lalezar has also children’s park and tea garden. Families can drink something at the tea garden while their children play in children’s park. In addition, some activities are sometimes held there. It is a park which has lots of visitors. Especially they come there in order to see multicoloured tulips. Sometimes it is very crowded and I feel as if I go to a concert. It has lots of green area, besides tulip gardens and a lot of animals live there. You can see these animals when you go there. You can also do sports there. It has racetrack. For example, I sometimes go there at the weekends for running.
To sum up; I can relax myself and feel better when I go there. A lot of people are also like me. They go there for fun and comfort. I wish this imaginative place became real and I lived this my imaginative place there forever.

process analysis essay

GRADUATION PARTIES
Graduation parties are very important for students because they get rid of all stress which they experience all the year. This day is a special day for students. In generally, it makes at the end of year and students who will graduate that year participate in this party. And both students are prepared for this party and the venue where the graduation will be celebrated is prepared for this party.
Firstly, the venue where the graduation will be celebrated is arranged months ago and it is specifically prepared for the party. In the place dinner is prepared with beverages and musics. It is decorated with balloons and ornaments and it waits guests preparingly.
Secondly, students specifically prepare themselves. They buy special clothes for graduation party. They (especially girls) arrange a hair dresser. Party day is very important day for them because the day organise for them. So they value their appearance. Girls make up and are made their hair. Boys also go to the barber. And everybody goes to the venue where the graduation will be celebrated.
And lastly, everybody gathers in the venue and they have a friendly chat. They sit the tables and eat diner. After diner, music starts and everybody starts dance. In the meantime waiters distribute beverages and snacks. Everybody has a good time. They dance until midnight.
Graduation parties are marvellous for having a good time for students. They get rid of all stress which they experience all the year thanks to the graduation parties. They live an unforgettable day. So they always remember that day.

6 Mayıs 2010 Perşembe

argumentative essay

SMOKING HABIT AND SMOKING PROHIBITION
Last year, smoking habit was hot topic in Turkey. To prevent smoking habit and to cut down smoking habit, Government prohibited smoking in somewhere and government has fined people for smoking cigarette in there since last year. However, smoking prohibition didn’t work exactly for cutting down smoking habit.
Firstly, government prohibited selling cigarette children who was under 18 years old. Actually, it was very beneficial for preventing smoking habit in children but it didn’t work. Because some small shops sold cigarette children who was under 18 years old. And government didn’t prevent this so children still continue smoking.
Secondly, government prohibited smoking cigarette in hospitals and schools. Everybody also supported this. Because people who didn’t smoke , didn’t like people who smoked and it irritated them. So they supported this prohibition but this prohibition but this prohibition also didn’t work exactly. For example; in my high school my friends and my teachers who smoked, started to smoke outside in break time after this prohibition. In short this prohibition also didn’t work for cutting dow smoking.
Lastly, government prohibited smoking in close areas (especially in cafes and bars) and government fined people for smoking in these areas. But it also didn’t work because people who smoke cigarette, started to smoke outside of the cafes and the bars . and this situation bothered people. Some people may say that it is work , people don’t smoke in close areas now. But it isn’t work because people continue smoking.
In conclusion, although government prohibit smoking, people continue smoking. Even they don’t smoke in close areas, they can smoke outside and they continue to poison themselves.

cause and effect essay

BECOME UNHAPPY
Why do people become unhappy? A lot of things can cause this. For example; friendship problems, family problems, loneliness etc. can cause becoming unhappy. And these reasons break through some emotional or psychological problems.
Actually, some reasons which cause becoming unhappy, are relevant each other. Because in generally these reasons break through same problems. For example; some people are very sad when they fail their exams or some people are under stres when they will enter exams and to be under stress can cause becoming unsuccessful and eventually these people who are under stress can be sad and unhappy. Or some people who have family or friendship problems can be unhappy. These reasons and problems are very harmful for people. Because these can affect people emotionally or psychologically.
To sum up, there are a lot of reasons for becoming unhappy and these reasons can cause some problems. These problems can also affect people badly.