22 Ekim 2010 Cuma

TWO DİFFERENT OBSTACLES
Everybody experiences lots of obstacles in their own life. Sometimes these obstacles could be came about regarding the family or connected with money like in Angela’s Ashes. Or sometimes they could be came about physically just like in the Miracle Worker. We shouldn’t give up anything because of our obstacles. We should go after our dreams as Frank and Helen. They didn’t give up anything although they had some problems. Frank and his family had financial problems in Angela’s ashes. His brothers died because of these problems. His father abandoned them. He started to work and earn money because he had a dream and he wanted to go America. At the end of the film; he reached his dream. He went to America but in the Miracle worker; Helen had a different obstacle from Frank. She was blind and deaf. She told anybody her problems and she was a wild child. She hadn’t got financial problems like Frank in Angela’s ashes but I think her problem was more important than Frank. Frank could read and write but she couldn’t. Her family called a teacher and teacher taught her finger alphabet. She learned some words and at the end of the story; her family, her teacher and she was very happy. She wasn’t a wild child anymore because she didn’t give up. So the Miracle worker was more impressive film than Angela’s Ashes. Both of them was dramatic but the miracle worker was more effective than Angela’s Ashes. In conclusion; in both of film main characters had some obstacles but their obstacles was different from each other. In spite of these different obstacles, they didn’t give up and they exceeded their obstacles.

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  1. hi betüş :)I don't understand your first sentence.you said that his father abandoned them,but I guess this sentence should be his father abandoned to them. earn money ,you said earned money.... but I liked it:)

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  2. Hi Betül;
    The content is good.In your title,you shouldn't use "İ".There are grammer mistakes "obstacles could be came","to go America","in both of film","obstacles was"...Thanks for writing:) see you.

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  3. him my ffriend =) how are you? =)
    at firstşyour writing organizaiton is good but you can improve it and there are some grammatical errors like all of us make =) such as;you say we should not give up anything
    =i think it is not completely a true sentence....told=to told.her family,her teacher and she was=it is wrong were happy.also ı know so isn't used in the beginning of the sentence.lastly,insteaf of uing teacher you can use tutor.thanks for writing.seee you =)

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